Lots to see
I like this because there was lots to see, and there are lots of wonderful colors to see aswell, Now this kind of picture really shows all the differant stuff going on also showing how much effort the artist put into it, so props to you for that as its pretty impressive, one of my main issues i thought this could have had would be that it was all too "SMALL" i would like to see it on a much larger canvas, there seems to be so much happening i think more focus needs to be on each area like more understanding of whats going on in this scene, just an idea from the viewers point of view, your art style and color use is notbad, i thought some more texture could be used though and maybe even some more deeper colors, again making a larger piece here you could have more focus on all the happenings in the picture, So all in all its a nice art piece with lots to see and some wonderful colors, and once again by making it larger you can ad more of the scene, and adding improved colors so with this few tips i hope it helps, good luck on your next entry.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
First of all i think a much larger canvas could help to show off much more of each and every little point, some more deeper colors might also help to showing off the colors better.
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