I like the direction this is going.
But I'm not seeing a focal point so my eye is wondering all over the painting and it's kinda straining.
I like the colors, and at the same time there seems to be a lack of composition which kinda enhances the lack of focal point and last of all there seems to be the same level of rendering throughout the whole picture,as well as the same shades/hues of color throughout the whole which kind of makes it a'll blend in together and seem blurry. I suggest maybe diluting some of those brighter colors on the background with a light blue or so to kind of create the illusion of depth and so the background doesn't blend with the midground and foreground.
Thank you for your input :)
I'll keep this in mind.
It's true as you say the picture lacks a bit of dept. I need to go away from one colour only scheme more and work with all of it. I have some struggles when working with colour though. Its easier with black and white for me but I love bright colours aswell.
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