I saw your secret message on the frontpage asking for tips/help.
So no more audio? Just adult drawings now?
My only tip would be to keep drawing-- the pencil sketch aesthetic incorporates a much more gothic appeal to your art that makes it stand out from other adult submissions. I'd like to see what else you have in store, because for right now, I'm seeing the really cool color blending within the face and hair that will only establish a signature style the more art you produce.
You have a highly enjoyable shading and blending style that creates an almost pulp fiction atmosphere for an overall unique design that I'm sure will make it's own stamp on the art community for its originality.