You are indeed much better with a cartoon style than you are with more realistic style.
Be cautious with the uneven eyes, they are bothersome.
Did you notice that the nose is darker than the rest of the face? If anything the nose is one of the shiniest parts of the face and should hold some serious highlights.
You did well on coloring the heir with highlights and shadows, now do the rest of the body that way.
This artist has not been scouted yet.
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