Not Liking This....
I'm not liking the way you have just tossed the anatomy and proportions out the window. If the line are was smooth then it could be passed off as humorous, but here it just looks bad.
Try and get it more fluid if you want it to work.
This image raises many questions.
The first and foremost delving deep into the intricate mechanics of slime engineering and scientific studies. As exemplified here, the substance appears to have attained a previously absent human-like distinction; this being facial expression as well as the organs to achieve such expression.
On closer inspection it is obvious the man in the image is heavily disgusted at these newly found elements so I conclude to say that stuff's fucking gross and I give this particular egg roll 7 dildos out of 87.5. Now I must go and eat food off the floor.
This artist has not been scouted yet.
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