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Aug 23, 2012 | 11:09 PM EDT
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Author Comments

There's like a whole bunch of different morals I could have come up with this, but I didn't.

Yeah, the anatomy sucks, and I'm aware Flash sucks at this kind of stuff but I can't color in Photoshop sooo yeah.



Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

I noticed something,you draw ALL your tits like theyre balloons dude,breasts have weight to them no matter what,even if they're fake etc. They need to sag,like making them squished together always and having em float next to her chin isn't hot,cause like, its not? ha,but seriously making em like squished balloons is wrong work on that,also I noticed the shading style you use for everything is based off of Cory's tutorial he gave.Although what he said was helpful I believe when he said he shades in "in circles" you took it too literally like it looks like a mess,some areas dont even need shading,and in some areas there's no light on the shaded areas,the half circle thing you keep doing doesn't look appealing to me,like it doesn't look right and just looks rushed.and Im not just talking about this picture I'm talking for most of your work that's like this,lyou may say its your "style" but it just looks kinda for colors,yeah they're good just practice shading and your anatomy, I'm not talking like im a expert cause im still learning and practicing anatomy and shading also . Just my input.
Crap p.s work on your head consistency,cause that's off in this comic.
OK that's it, I'm gonna kiss a boy or something.

Twisted4000 responds:

You say "the shading style I used is based off of Cory's tutorial", but I didn't even see any of his tutorial videos when I drew this, I just picked colors that I liked. And what, you don't use colors based off of his tutorials? Um, I don't want to sound harsh but to me your stuff looks like it's trying to be a direct copy of his, and apparently a lot of others think so, too.

No hard feelings, but next time you want to critique someone else's stuff, take a step back and look at what you're doing yourself.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

once again you have pa-dazzled me (im running out of words) this time it looks like a comic page of a lost episode of something.

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Rated 4 / 5 stars

Woah she has bigger tits than I do!

Twisted4000 responds:

Well no surprises there