WOMAN!
I DONT WANT YOUR BEANS!
SO I like this guys pose; although his left arm and leg could use a bit more clarity; its not automatically clear what is happening there. I like how you did this with only harsh transitions, quite a feat, although I think you could have done better.
Lightning is a bit all over the place I think you could have done a lot better on that.
All in all, Good concept, but still rough around the edges.