I'm digging it, dude. I like how she look.
Only thing I don't get is what is she on. Is it a sofa or a bed or loveseat or..?
Other than that, it looks dope.
Your focused too much on stylization and not your fundamentals. First look up gesture-then mannequinization- then contour. Also look up the Loomis method of drawing. If you do all this you'll become way better in no time.
Thanks for the advice ^^
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