Brilliant

I love the "WORLD" you create here seems like a place and element that could make for a nice comic series, I would frame this with a colored frame or border, Alright so this was a brilliant style and not just because its black and white but because you have shown us the raw style points "BEFORE-THE-COLOR", and thats what I like about this piece and the Black and white doesnt hurt either its some real raw art style here.

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I would frame this with a colored frame or border

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Branches in the three in particular look pretty rushed in this one, but I love the scenery overall, dreamy and imaginative... Avatar influence maybe?

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