Great capture but lacks intensity.
It's a satisfying-looking piece of art here. I love the concept and short story you've written 'cause it fits with the art; however, I think you could have added more things to make this piece even more dramatic. For example, making this scene darker with some lights from the moon revealing the bloodshed could really gives me a chill. Right now, the whole image sort of looks flat to me because there's not enough light and shadow elements in. Try throwing in more shades and shadows in this piece, and you'll surely capture emotions much more.
Anyway, it's a very good piece of art. :) Keep it coming
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Thanks again for the reviews, they were just what I needed to inspire me to continue doing these drawings. I couldn't really find a good way to show the distance between the foreground and the background, and that idea about more shading might just be it. I think I'll try to remake this scene in another picture, hopefully capturing more emotions.
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