This is hot. The only thing wrong with this pic is one of Star's boobs in the big shot in the middle is too small and doesn't have enough volume to it. Why can't you draw boobs consistently? I've noticed that you have been improving on your boob drawing skills (you used to really suck at that), but it looks like you need more practice. I have been enjoying this comic so far, so keep up the good work!
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