Notbad at all
Hmm well i must say these are differant and nice sketches, i guess you are going with the black and white style, would be really nice with some "COLOR" in the mix though, its really nice and detailed, even a splash of color here and there wouldnt hurt, or instead of the sketches why not just add some sorta comic style so that you have it in frames somehow, its a good drawing and good detail, the black and white is cool but could be better with some color mixed in.
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Some suggestion of color, and even comic style would work on this
It seemed like such a disappointment that you had only made a single flash submission here. I am overjoyed to find out that you are in fact working on a sequel. This was a good piece, but not one of your best. What it kind of lacked was color. The rest of it is done pretty well, especially with the designs. The creepiest image has to be the vampire like creature with its long tongue on the left side.
I love how the main guy's hair is just twisting around in all directions. It gives him a sense that he's trying to spread chaos throughout his entire environment. The sharp razor backs of these guys is another terrifying feature. The face in the upper left corner is also pretty disturbing as it seems fairly innocent. There's so many body parts to put hooks on.
BTW I hope you know this is a kiddo we're dealin' with! XD
I would make more flashes...IF I had a pen tablet and the funds to purchase decent animating software. Maybe a kind soul would collaborate with me for an animation project? As long as this character disturbs you....then I have achieved my goal! XD
The details really popped it out! thanks for writing it!
Thank you very much! =D
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