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Comic Final for Sequential 2 page 1

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2.38 / 5.00

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May 18, 2017 | 1:49 AM EDT
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A final I did for Sequential Illustration 2

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I-am-MooseI-am-Moose

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Overall really good. Great character models and color schemes. The blue in the helmet really works along with the vibrant reds and yellows. That blue gives me rest I can come back to after looking around the vibrant compositions. I like how you understand the models, especially in the third panel and how we see the subjects nose from the front. Your panels flowed into each other nicely.

My only concern (i know this was a final, but really just for future reference) is the lack of variety tonal value in the trees in the background. It made it seems as if it was all on one plane and very flat. Why it concerns me is because I was distracted from what was happening in your panels. Lastly, I would love to see more dynamic angles of your character to really sell the action in the panels, especially in those panels with the blue samurai character.

Look forward to more work! :) or not... no pressure


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