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just another pen and ink i did on the train and in art history class
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not bad

but not magnificent.
The shadows seem slightly "free-balled" and not thought out much. (the staff could use a shadow)
Also the wind seems to be affecting some things, but some things it doesn't affect (the feathers dangling from the round part of the staff). If they're not feathers, you should give more indication as to what they are.
Also, this isn't a big thing but if you spent a little more time on it before uploading adding more to it, it could have came out better (you could have him standing on a cliff looking down onto a mighty kingdom or something)
It feels very bland.

TheL1st responds:

whats not helping the details is a very bad scanner
some of the shadows are planned out and more pronounced and others i agree aren't planned very well
I'm still working on being able to draw a human figure so i didn't want to over devote on something that had a very improper form

I do about a drawing per week day if i get the time, so keep checking in
and looking for improvements as i try to make them

I also have this issue with not knowing when ive finished an object so i end up over shading and it turns into just an inky mess, I am trying very hard to correct the habit be patient

thank you for the review
~ l1st

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