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Two bears doing high fives.

Give me ideas for more posts ill include that you gave me the idea. mix animals together or things together or whatever. tell me like 3 items to mix and make a blend of into one creature and i will attempt it. i need the practice.

DONE BY HAND. had to take a picture cuz i don't have scanner big enough for that whole thing.

Follow me and watch as i get better at art and improve my skill. it should be interesting.

im still new btw.

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good start

It really is.

Problems:
The number one thing I have to ask is; Is it suppose to be on it's side like that?
If it is then I think it would look better in portrait layout.
The secoint thing I need to address has little to do with the art its self and more about your presentation... again.... The lighting seems dark go to the Art101 account and read this; http://art101.newgrounds.com/news/post/314936 it will help you with taking better photographs of your paintings.
Continuing with the critique is the bears could use a little more definition. The two of them tend to blend a bit.

Good:
The lack of a full background in this seems to work this time. The background has a simple but abstract appeal to the painting.
the composition has a good feel to it.

over all, a couple of changes to the presentation would do some wonders.
Keep practicing. As I told you earlier, drop by the Art Forum for some more critique and exposure.
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