Lovely, soft tones and great execution. the lighting is well done, and colors and composition flow well. The fair feels a little less than tangible (if that makes sense), like it's not a physical object, the light is playing on it differently. Make sure to not shy away from using shadow on something like hair, it seems the hesitation comes from not wanting to lose tha care you took creating the detailed hair texture, but it needs to happen to make the image flow more as a whole. Otherwise great work, I hope you did well in your assignment!
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