What I gone, done, and lost
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What I gone, done, and lost

Author Comments

I'm planning on starting a comic series soon. If this art style intrigues you there's more on my blog.

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You're good at telling a story, however you need to work some more with less a less monotone panel layout. Instead of having 8 panels of equal size and shape, try and play around and merge some. This'll make for a much more interesting layout where you can pace the story up or down depending on what you want as a narrator :)


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Jul 1, 2014 | 11:39 PM EDT
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