He is outside, its pretty dark, he is holding a flaming weapon, yet there is no lighting coming from the billowing flame right next to his body. Even a small candle has a dramatic effect in a dark place. He is also holding his weapon very awkwardly and the pommel is not aligned with his hand. Also, generally speaking the folds in his clothes are very awkward and unnatural, even the baggiest clothes made of the softest materials dont fold that way. There is also a cleft in his jawline but it is not there in the other side of his face. At a quick glance this is a decent picture, but there is quite a few things lacking here.
Agreed. The commissioner asked for the weapon to be added when I was nearly done, so that's was the best I could do under the circumstances, haha. I will definitely try to improve on those points, thank you for the critique :)
that fired up sword looks a bit weird..
It does. It was my first attempt on fire.
Im gonna go on a limb and guess that this is Fallout?
If it is...Its a 100% badass alright.
It is! Haha. Thank you so much!
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