She looks kind of chubby (maybe hear too puffy? cheeks a bit pudgy?), and eyes are a bit flat, but otherwise nice detail! The light on the edges of the hair in particular. Good color too, just the form that feels a bit off. And that visual sparkle.
Hermione was totally pudgy in Year one :) but thank you so much for the feedback!
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