I love the background, but the figure could use a bit of work. Some varying thickness in your lines on her jacket would help her feel less MSPaint-ey, and her face sticks out like a sore thumb. I don't know if I would have gone with anime style. for this one.
The background is fantastic, but I feel that you should have used different colors for her hair.
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