Well this was funny it was very funny infact even game me some "LOL" moments and I supose thats the intent on this piece here wouldnt mind some backround details though.
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All this needs is some backround is detail, some small details that spark interest.
It is okay, but not your best work.
i like the fact that the penis rips the pants
IF, hahahah. Nice style, but looks a bit boring. I'm not sure how, but it's missing something.
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