Based on the art:
Nice art, I really like the shading you do. It looks pretty good.
Although I can tell you flipped the screen upside down for Ivan's screen. I know you did it to make the danger seem more imminent, (at least I think that's why), but it pulled me out a little, which brings me to
Based on the story:
Not much happened other than the establishment of a threat, as well as the security system that Swami has, that Swami is actually a pretty freakin' awesome programmer. Okay, so a good amount.
Actually the screen being flipped is purely an error. Oops!
Or I could just say Ivan reads everything upside down... but we both know that's just silly :)
You rapscallion. What did I not JUST tell you in my last review? You're walking a thin line. Today is my birthday. Saw you in my feed. Said, "ALRIGHT! A VIDEO!" Just to learn it was more 3D art (Which I still thoroughly enjoy). You have 48 hours starting now, 2:51PM EST. I will be waiting,
Happy birthday! I'll grant you 100 internet points!
I do have a big project to get out of the way first before I can get more animated content rolling (partly to fund the debt of $1.5k software purchase imposed on the budget, partly to provide training material for possible contributors). Once that is out of the way, hopefully by the end of November, I'll be able to re-focus on creating animated content.