New World Visual Novel V1
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New World Visual Novel V1

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The title for a visual novel we made for a Highschool Project. Putting it here with link to full version. Asking for response to story. Thanks for your time!
Two highschoolers, one month of work, and a lot of under-wing with music from the Newgrounds God HalcyonicFalconX (Phyrnna). THIS IS AN ALPHA

https://www.dropbox.com/s h/o03xu8ppvx8hwpl/WSAefdq Wt6

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Reviews


It's okay. Not really sure it belongs in this part of Newgrounds though... Maybe look up the forums?


tallcaddell responds:

I tried, but VN's don't have much of a following here. Kinda surprised actually. Maybe make it a type of game?


Really cool and innovative idea for a school project! I've never seen anything like it as far as for educational purposes. Very nicely made. I loved the music, and it went well with the plot!


tallcaddell responds:

Hahaha, look up HalcyonicFalconX. I can't imagine this without the music, and she has plenty more!


Very nice job for a high school project. The music and artwork matched the story very well, and the story itself was nicely written, especially since its based on real accounts. Honestly it's a bit amateurish, but for a high school project, not bad at all, very nice job.


tallcaddell responds:

Eh, it was a first attempt. We had wanted to do more, but deadlines have a way of pushing unfinished work into the open. We have plans on making a much better version over time.


This is a really touching story! I was actually surprised by the relatively well drawn characters!! The music fits really well into the visual novel, and it really helped sway my emotions while reading/watching!! Good job! I'm really impressed! And it really does make me think about the broad idea of poverty and suffering/charity. Amazing job! You should be proud!!! :)


tallcaddell responds:

Wow, like, awesome review there. I'm glad you liked it so much! My friend and I worked vary hard on it, and Halcyonic was gracious enough to open her whole library, so I feel we were well equipped! From what I can tell, the music was a strong point of the game. I recommend checking out her profile! It's got hundreds of more songs! *.*

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Apr 21, 2013 | 8:54 PM EDT
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