the chin and jawline are off putting to the character.
the shoulders need to arc a as well as having the arms curved but not as much as the legs.
That nose could work for a women but the eyes along with the brow seem to stern and bold.
try loosening up the face, make it more relaxed.
Also try adding one small lash at the end of the eye once you've ( if you ) do the previous.
other than that, the character base looks great, and the semi-neon blue outline with the monitor light creeping over the side of the character is a nice touch.
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