The problem notice right away is her eyes. Enormous eyes for an average size head. You created wonder hair texture but the thick outlines ruin it. The tips of her bangs aren't colored in which create a messy look. Her lips and tongue look ridiculous. The nose is generic. You gave her retina a heart-shape but I don't believe she's truly enjoying what she's doing when her face looks disgust. Don't ever get discourage from drawing and I hope you improve greatly.
thanks for your criticism, I like to do big eyes and a pointy nose.
As for everything else, yeah I should work more on those things.
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