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Steampunk Girl

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HAHA Look at that thumbnail...

ANYWAY!

This is the BEST thing I have ever made DDD: Took me so long I lost track of time.. I gave up a few times then thought "If I dont do it Ill never get better" SO I MADE IT here it is.... steampunk... and I AM proud of myself.

PLEASE NOTE: The size of this image is BIGGER but newgrounds said "NO BITCH" and made me resize it.

The only thing that made me quick several times btw was the hair : /

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good but....

i'm not gonna point out the obvious, but with some more practice, redraw this and it could be amazing! (i know how this kinda stuff feels. i'm not a very good artist)

Syringes responds:

Yea ill work on it. I would redraw this particular one but I had already colored it and such.

I really like your colouring and shading style..

... but your drawing techniques seem to be kinda iffy. The woman is a tad we out of proportion and has unusually stickily arms. Work on drawing some muscles! I am not talking macho girl, but look take a look at anyones arms, and you will see they are not perfectly flat. But as I said, great colour!

Syringes responds:

Thanks. I know what you mean, its not like I havent been examining arms, its just that its not that easy for me to learn @_@ I practice a lot. D: When it comes to the coloring though, I tend to ruin all the anatomy that is below... :[

Thanks for your review. :]

8th review :(

Sorry Im slow!!!!!

2 criticisms:
a) shoulder and arm-to-body scales seem a bit...off
b) whatever she is riding on, could have been better, you can see the bumps and dents from where u got lazy and didnt wanna straigten em out

-GJ<3

Syringes responds:

Thanks

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I didnt get lazy lol I didnt see them, I actually was constantly deleting that part, never turned out how I wanted it for some reason :[

Holy..

HOLY TITTIES! O-0 anyway greta job on this. :)

Syringes responds:

I know! THAY ARE SO BIG! I cant believe I did that I am a little ashamed of myself :[

THANKS THOUGH!

nice

i really like the background, shadows and textures. the hair is well done too. but the proportions of the girl aren't respected (like the arm which is too thin). so : nice picture and keep drawing ^^

Syringes responds:

Lawl Ill fix the arm then, thanks for letting me know! : D

And thank you for your vote ^^

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Apr 17, 2010
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