I like her expression. But her proportions are off. You should study from a reference before drawing something from your imagination. There are many pictures on the internet that you can use as a reference. There are also tutorials that could help you. The lines are a bit messy as well. It would look much better if the lines were more consistent.
Thanks :) I'll give them a look! I don't look at references much but maybe it's something I should get into the habit of doing haha! And the lines will be dealt with ^_^
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