But you must also work on you gender specific imagery. The face of Yugi in the foreground looks like a female face. And it isn't the coloring, I have drawn a handful of guys with eyeshadow, lashes, (not present) soft colored/lipstick painted lips, and they still look like a man. It is how the contrast of the lines flow. All the little flaws that lean one way or another can add up an create what people would id as what gender. But there are also ways to draw something that looks more one, but can be accepted as the other.
not too good
This was interesting
this was prety neat and kinda interesting, what i see is a young and older or a past and present? i could be wrong, this is an all nice image here i think it needs one touch though and that for me would be some "FRAMES/BORDERS" around the edges it just reminds me of one of thjose types that would have some
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add some frames and or borders to give it that extra touch
It could be better. I see potential here, so keep trying!
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