I like your taste in anime work, keep it up!
This one seems particularly interesting.
It seems that you have changed your coloring style, and one of the most notorious factors that proves this exact point is the clothes folds. This new technique of yours is really close to professional anime/manga, as you intended. Congratulations. May I ask the "coordinates" for the skin tone you used? I am a bit messy with those and never manage to find the most appropriate one.
You have some trouble with proportions, though. At least, I feel like you do, in certain aspects of the drawing, that is. Let us start by the body structure. At first glance, it looked like it was too thin, but then it sort of adapted itself to my sight. Then, her right hand fingers don't look so good. Maybe the thumb should be a little bit bigger? I don't have anything against the head, though, as previous reviews.
Moving on, her skirt seems to have a squared structure, and it should have, but with more detailies, as there are a lot of folds in those, I suppose.
That is all. Hold on. No, it is not. One last question: That's not the best place to have an itch during a photo, is it?
Kore wa sugoi desu, Suwako-chan. Kentou!
- Kagekiyo-gensei. (I'm a new person now)
loved it, the style was amazing , the colours were great, but i must say that you need to take tone for your audience. you have to notice that you made this for a company, not yourself. if they did have a pornographic side, i wouldnt know, but dont have her gesturing and fingering at the same time. all of the aspects were amazing thogh, i actually liked the proportions of this pic, and the clothes were creative yet not crazy, also, you used a nice software, that always counts.
please reply and regard- merrick williams
The head is way to big, you should really consider looking at some real life examples when you start with your next picture, also you should give here some expression since the almost invisible mouth makes the picture a bit dull.
Also, the coloring mthod you chose made the picture look very flat, of course that 's your choise but it's a lot more interesting to look at something that pops out at you
But could very well have had more time put into the line art first, as she looks incredibly out proportion. Her torso's actually a bit too long in length, and she is no where near the right width. Making her have a twig appearance. Like she could snap over at any time. Also, her legs look waaaaay too short...
Her head is also quite large and in comparison to her torso, it should not be that big.
I also actually do not like the overall pose... There's not excitement to it. Nothing that says anything about her personality, or who she is, other than putting up her hand and pushing down her skirt. She doesn't have a charismatic or even just a simple appealing pose to her. She has quite an awkward pose, and expression, making her look very plain and generic.
The coloring's nice though. I do like that.