I love the detail in the headpiece, Even though it looks rushed, its still better than anything I could do! The crest coming off the head looks complex, lots of detail went into it. Good work.
Remember to define your edges well, and I would add some texture differences in the body to give it even more "pop".
For instance, (this is just me, but) I would keep the grey portions with that sort of "matte" texture they have atm, and I would add some highlights and smooth out the red portions to give them a gloss finish. Maybe add some subtle chrome elements, as well. Hope it helps!
Nice work dude
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