Very big imporvement

While they are swapped I think the one you started with on the left also looks nice but I don't think it will ever compare with how you draw now, they just look a lot happier and cooler. besides the point you already have plenty of people who make drawings on the left all the time, you bring a unique style to the table. Wonder if it will ever catch on?

cewl

wow, huge legs, REALLY small waist... OH I KNOW!!!!! ITS MY BROTHER!... kidding, kidding... awesome though, i can see what you mean

:O!!

Why are the legs so freakishly big and disproportionned...? o.o;

... me

I like the more sketchy pictures, like the one on the right ... But I can see what you mean by improvements. either one of them is really good though.