I don't get it.
I don't get it.
Well, the lines look sloppy; what program did you use to make this? If it's flash,, then I suggest switching to the pencil tool, and cleaning up your lines as you go along with drawing whatever it is you're illustrating. I suggest that you enlarge the words, as some people might have trouble with reading them. I got the joke, and sadly, it is relevant.
Take more time on your submissions, and they'll come out better.
Thanks for the tips man. I've gotten some complaints about the size of the text before, so that is something to work on. I did use flash to make it, I'll try out the pencil tool next instead of the paintbrush one. Thanks for the help man, much appreciated!
The humor is there, but the art is lacking
It's funny how that is basically what most of their ads are of,
but the art leaves something to be desired, now I'm sure you've seen some of my animations and how I'm no artistic genius so I hope you aren't disheartened by my hyporcitical judgement,
but some of the text is difficult to read (specifically the text under the guy) and the drawing just seems messy, not because his body is out of proportion but because the smoothing is so awkward, I suggest in flash you lower the smoothing a tad, or raise it.... whichever you prefer, and what suits your art style.
im sure i overanalyzed this lol but u asked for a review so..... here it is lolz
peace out home dawg.
Thanks for the review man. I really don't know why it matters what status you are on this site, constructive criticism is constructive criticism, haha.
Anyway, the body does need some work, I could never draw people very well. I had the idea floating in my head, but just the Teenick logo plus text would be plain. The text being difficult to read is understandable as well. I didn't have much room, but it is in an unpleasant location and is hard to read.
Anyway, thanks for the tips bro, they are always appreciated. See you later!
The picture does have some humor, but the guy just doesn't look that good.
i like it!
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