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That is creepy as hell.

I agree with Zomby's comments, it really is very polished looking and I can tell you put a lot of thought into the details.

Well I ended up losing my whole review because my computer shut down and I can't possibly write all of that again. So I am going to summarize what I had written before and I'm sorry it's not as good as it would have been.

I had said that this picture is almost perfect aside from the fact that the edges are so rough. Her outline should be smoothed out some, and that would make all the difference in this.
Her eyes look like they are meant to be colored red, and with some red makeup maybe, however, they look like they are bleeding. If this was intended then very well, and it looks good, but you should try and fix it if it wasn't. I think it is too small to put enough detail in it to make them look red with red makeup, but that is just my opinion.
Also, I would close her mouth as like I said just before, it is too small to put the detail of her teeth in, so with it being small it just looks kind of odd.
You have drawn her feet almost perfectly, and you don't come across too many artists who can draw hands and feet this well.

I am totally in love with the background, it makes her the main focus. I see some fog around her and just barely a floor where she is sitting, you haven't totally left a background out but then again you kind of did, I like it because the viewer concentrates on her,
Very good job.

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Stormchainer responds:

so sweet of you to write up a whole feedback :D twice!

now that you mention it, i can finally see whats been buggining me x/ for hours i kept refining that face and it kept looking strange when i zoomed out . and then i refined it some more.

detailed backgrounds are my arch nemesis. D: glad i can make do with simple ones xD

thanks for ideas! <3

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4.04 / 5.00

Sep 20, 2013
10:53 AM EDT
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808 x 989 px
100 KB

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