if I had to guess, I'd say you drew this free handed using your mouse, next time try to sketch something on paper first then scan it then trace and color it in flash from there, it will look a lot better trust me.
Also if you color somebody else's art make sure you credit them, `cause otherwise it's steeling.
This looks crap
I think you could respond better than that
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