This was decent
Wellthis was a decent little strip here,it seemed too bland in some of the "FRAMES" though, andwould really be nice to see some color, now if you arenot all for color thats cool, but even just a touchof color here and there would be nice like say a tree or a light post etc while everythingelse is kept black and white, but as for the comic itself it was pretty interesting just seemed blandas there could have been more drawings and linework in some of those bland areas, i guess what im saying is fill in the blank areas abit more, anyways you have a decent piece here.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So i mentioned some tips on making things better like,some added color or just some focus points of color, And also there were some bland frames that could be filled abit better,
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