the character looks interesting, but the bottom text seems to get lost in the background. an the character should stand out more, id suggest darkening the colors on the character while trying to keep the pale look of her (it is a her right?) it just seems the background is light and the character is light as well so it all seems to get kinda absorbed in the background ya know.
Well, that was helpful :D, thank you very much, sir!
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