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0.00 / 5.00

Apr 21, 2010 | 8:27 PM EDT
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330 x 220 px
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The Look of Attack.



Rated 4 / 5 stars

Good overall.

This is a good art submission; it seems a little plain, but overall it's a nice picture and a pretty cool concept. Good on this ^^.

The colour scheme is good. The skin was a good colour, and so was the hat. Maybe the eyebrows could be a bit darker, since they look like grey worms right now :P. The shading could use some work, like putting shading around the nose to make it look like it's sticking out and stuff, since right now the face is a bit flat. Texture could be a bit better, such as making some bruises and scars on his face and hair texture on his eyebrows. It would definitely give this a realistic touch. Texture on the hat was fine.

The concept is good. Slightly generic, but good. As for the picture itself, it was draw well. Maybe you could make the hat a bit bigger, and you could make it almost cover his eyes, then shade around his eyes a little. It would definitely give him a more menacing look. Also, the left eye is a *little* further down from the right eye, maybe you could fix that. Still, other than those small problems, this is a well-drawn picture. I like the lines that you did around his face. Definitely made him look more menacing.

The background was good, although it could be more interesting, like a street or something. Still, I liked that you made the background black, not white, since white will make it look a little stupid. Black FTW :D.

In general, this is good. Well-drawn, with good colours and good hat texture. Just add some more texture around the face, more shading, and maybe making the eyes in line a bit more. Keep upthe good work!
Recommended for the Art Portal.

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MCarsten responds:

Wow, really thanks by your review, I really enjoyed. Ok, I'll try to improve for my next art, trying to get what you asked to see the result. This image was an old Paint design that I done, but I imported to Flash and there I fixed the background and give the guy a better looking (lol, better I want to say, more evil looking) and I made some more details to his face and I reinforced some of the lines, like the eyebrow, as you can see. Thanks again for the nice review!!