I like the colors a lot, they work together very nicely, and the content is definitely interesting. I didn't feel like it was really dynamic enough though -- no part of it really "pops" for me -- there's no distinct sense of action or motion and it seems to rely a bit on filters in lieu of actual detail. It's going in the right direction and certainly seems creative, it just could use a little more attention to detail. :)
Hope you could find some useful critique in there. Keep up the nice work.
Thanks, I do appreciate the crit. This piece is actually just a test/prototype, the final piece is currently being tended to.
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