One of my favorite Dead or Alive characters! It's awesome to see some cool art of Hitomi, and you've done her justice here! I really like her pose too, it's looking like she's about to run off into a fight or something, which I think really adds more to the personality presented in this picture.
Crappy? This is anything but
You are really good. I am extremely impressed with your work and have recommended you for the Art portal.