Your line work in the hand conveys the form very well and like you mentioned the middle finger needs some fixing. I just like something is need in negative space of the upper left and bottom right conners of the page. Also, more visual elements to emphasize the connection between the hand and the "enigmatic creature" could help if you ever choose to do another one.
Well done (:
Thank you =)
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