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0.00 / 5.00

Sep 25, 2009 | 6:18 PM EDT
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Desciption- A Mario Fanboy finds himself a deadly mushroom-
My first peice of art. It's nothing but a doodle, but I made it as good as I could, for a paint project. Completely handrawn, created by Adam, thats enough info. Please don't review an tell me that your much better, I'm just an amatuer. But anyway, everyone I've shown it to thinks its cool, I just hope that the resizing really didn't take away too much animation in it.
Sketch= I do not take this so much as a sketch, considering I have revisited it multiple times. I take this as an ACTUALL peice of art. Also, I believe that this is original, if it is not sorry :/ I didn't find something like this anywhere else.
Adam - Sparky09



Rated 0 / 5 stars


I've taken shits better than this


Rated 2 / 5 stars

Not that great...

Well,first i'll talk about the art of the comic.Its simple,which is good,and rather cute.Though the background is poor,as the grass is just very messy and jagged.You could work more on the backgrounds.

As for the content of the comic itself,its a pretty over used concept,or similiar jokes have been used in the past.That,and i don't think the deliverance of the plot would have taken 9 panels.You could have easily done it in 3 or 4 panels.

Overall,this comic wasn't that great,but i was keeping in mind about how you said this comic was only really a doodle.And i dont expect master pieces from doodles.


Sparky09 responds:

Yea I get that 9 panal thing a lot. Thanks for the review, but truth be told this was my first comic. Latly I've been working on art, with a new drawing tablet. Charector designs are being worked on with more detail, and hopefully better. Thanks for the review, and the constructive critism. ;)