I do like alot of the details in there, but also be careful not to overdo it. I like how the puppeteer bows with the puppet in the top corner in the dark. Its good to have where people can read the text, but it's also important to keep the placing within a agreeable size inside the word bubbles.
Sometimes its hard, but also helps to compromise what you can do with it. The paneling is looking pretty good.
Before, (we it loooked bad) it got a really low score... so i am happy that what i did gave it a higher score ^.^
I love your comic so far, but is the puppeteer supposed to be evil or something, he/she gives ouf this vivbe that just makes says evil. It also makes me want to jump in the screen and PAWNCH!!!!! the puppeteer in the face.
it's a she... (if you couldn't tell from the boobiez) and she is suppose to be evil, i guess...
it'll make more sense later on in the comic
glad i have fans ^.^
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