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FINALLY! Page one is done!
I am only the first 2 pages of the comic in color... then the rest will be in black and white :)
It took me a while to draw it.... >.>
enjoy~

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Nice colors

I like the colors you used, but sometimes the brightness of the colors can be too distracting from the scenes. The panels are quite decent, but perhaps you'd like to add more?

This is a good start for the panels, I like how you drew your bubbles for your dialogue. interesting idea.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

lol, i only drew the bubbles because GIMP doesn't have any line or circle tools... the line you see there is just me typing "___" a bunch of times together

Heheh, this looks evil already.

I'm impressed. Such a vague entrance, and yet still powerful.
Art is of a good quality. The lighting is nice; not happy, and more foreboding than anything else.
And speech bubble shadows are a nice touch.
My only quirk is that I don't like the text...
It seems to not fit in correctly with the art direction. It's too generic. You need something less modern and more contemporary (1920/30's ish, since that's when puppetry seems to be most commonly portrayed).
All I've got to say for this one.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

cool! I'm glad that SOMEONE is impresed with it! :D
I always have trouble with the speech bubbles... dunno why... i just do. And i only did ONE picture where i actually think i did some really good speech bubbles.... >.>
anyways, thanks for the review! I'll remember that! But this is going to be the last page that i have colored for now.... >.>
THANKS! :D

Good start :D

I must say that you're very good at drawing closed eyes! Can't wait to see how this turns out... And now I know what shade of purple her waistcoat is :D

Sorrygirl99 responds:

oh! ... ya!
Thanks!
Sorry... if i didn't really explain the shades of colors.... i feel really bad now!! :CC

FIRST!!

anyways not much is happening yet but nice job on attracting the viewers immediate attention with an instant feeling of evil and foreboding death. However I think the colors are a bit to vibrant to be a horror scene. I think it will be better in black and white.

Sorrygirl99 responds:

its only colored for the first two pags... page #1... :3

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