Cat in the Bag pt 2 by SnippyJammin on Newgrounds

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Cat in the Bag pt 2

Part 1: https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/snippyjammin/cat-in-the-bag-pt-1

Part 3: https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/snippyjammin/cat-in-the-bag-pt-3

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SquizofrenicCat

2021-01-22 00:48:41

I'm particularly digging the coherence/structure in these 2 pages so far, and also the fact the beige cat (Bitey?) showed she isn't an unsalvageable cunt after all.

The last 6 panels, to me, were as if her facade of looking tough/disconnected as a defense mechanism against most bullshit in her gross world (depicted in other strips) finally came down crashing. That, or the sedatives/blood loss took their toll on her adrenaline bank. I like them either way.

I know the handwritten text might be an actual thing you wanna do, but you may want to consider turning your handwriting into a custom font to save time and keep consistency, as it can get difficult to read at times currently.

SnippyJammin responds:

Yeah, Bitey's the beige cat. And thank you! Your insights are far above the scope I feel my comic occupies, but I appreciate it immensely. I've always felt that the handwriting was always a rough point and my own bad handwriting habits leads to a lot of inconvenience (both for writing and reading). Thank you for finally pushing me to make a font, I kept putting it off. So look forward to that. Thank you again.