I like your colour scheme.
I like your style with nothing being so sharp.
I just basically like the whole idea of it.
I didn't want to see so professional about it as i no how pencil & pen can be hard work sometimes.
If you would like a suggestion on a Free Digital Drawing Program I'd say Gimp would be the best option as it is free, does everything Photoshop does & I use it.
You have a good knowledge of art whether you no it or not, you've made this thought to yourself it looks correct & great & then submitted it.
& That there is a Art. What I see right now, is Art.
Great job but bare in mind if this was in the Art Portal every ones opinion would not be the same as mine.
However you've done a good job, now all you need to do is get the colours to fit with the rest, e.g your colours should match completely without the light blobs of the same colour etc etc.
You no doubt already no that & as your using cheap colouring pens they do intend to do that a lot.
There are colouring pens out there that prevent this. But they are really expensive. I don't have money for that sort of thing & i'm sure you don't, that's why most of us use digital programs because we get that clean coloured looks & plus when your drawing and go wrong you cant think to yourself i'll just use Ctrl + Z Like i always do ROFL
The beauty of technology.
Once again great job & sorry for the HUGE review, I just hope it helps.
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