A nice illustration. I would say that the horizontal lines are a little overkill in the center of the image, I'd suggest next time toning down the amount that is in front of the character in that respect or even increasing the size of the text and bringing it down to that area as that too isn't really working for me where it is.
The next thing I'd suggest would be to use a computer software (GIMP would work though if you can get it Illustrator would be better.) and make the blacks more mat and crisp.
Yaw I don't have any digital editing program for my art. What you see is the actual final product of what I do with my own bare hands. I kind of take pride in the fact my stuff is hand drawn and traditional. But still thank you for the review, also helpful and insightful. :)
I don't usually like black metal because the vocals sound to me like they're trying to vomit or something. I dunno. I usually listen to stuff like metalcore and melodic death metal. The instrumental for this sounds pretty good though
I normally don't listen to that kind of metal either, but this band, idk, there's just a really awesome sound to them that i like, lol. And yaw you're right, the instrumental does sound really awesome.
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