I don't care for the obvious generic anime' trope influence, so you lose points for that, sir. (ma'am?)
But, I do really see ingenuity in your drawing style.
Everything, but the faces and eyes, (which look as though you're attempting to marry the anime style with your own, which is ill suited match) is great.
I see what you mean. I was trying to combine my own style with Erebun's so I guess it didn't come out too well. I was never good with drawing anime anyway. Thank you for your honest critique.
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