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Look out it's Mike Tison

Its very nice! The big guy is buffing himself w a power I guess. Girl is like "Oh no!" its cool!

Character expressions are great, but honestly the composition is kind of messy.
The colors particularly are disorienting and making it harder to read what's going on. Eye flow is off, and I'm not sure where my eyes are supposed to be focusing.

When you make an illustration, consider in the future where you want the viewers eyes to start, and where you want them to focus. especially in comic pages, you need to direct the viewers eyes across the page in a smooth, satisfying manner. See:
http://comicbookgraphicdesign.com/wp-content/uploads/2013/09/comic-art-terms-panel-flow.jpg

Close ups of faces, heavy contrast, negative space, lighting effects, and character posing are all used to do this. The composition is good in the posing, face, and negative space department, but the bright orange lights (ESPECIALLY) the squiggly yellow tentacle thing at his feet, is so strong and attention-demanding, that it's disorienting.

Hopefully that was helpful I like your art style, I look forward to what you do next.

bro, you rock. awesome style

Love the colours and the effects.
This is one of the weirder fights (fucking meteors)...
+1 for under-boob

(just finished reading part 6)

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Smashega
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