Stop being too hard on yourself, he's great.
My only suggestion, is maybe a darker outline around him - like a shadow perhaps, to set him apart from the background (both are reddish tints) and maybe a key light source reflecting on the right side of him (not necessary, just personal preference). Other than that, he gives off an atmosphere on his own! Good job!
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