The side face needs work... you need lumps for the lips (I usually have the bottem half sticking out more then the top half of a face... take a look at some anime examples and you'll see what I mean)
The ear usuallyis between the nose and the eye, and less pointy...
hair seems fine, perhaps only a few edits on the top of it...
as with the energy trails, perhaps you need more.... and brighter in the center
to top it all off and add a gloomy effect, add a radial or something, draw focus to the eye crying (Use the alpha channels, radial the hell out of it)
Hm... perhaps I should start uploading my stuff....
Yer I know what you are saying but I was not trying to focus to much on the tear
the tear itself is just a drop to show some emotion.
as for the ear I was trying something different so I deliberate drew it that low
but thanks for the constrictive criticism
TRY HARDER ALMOST THERE!
mate this picture needs work on it :P
That dark look gives me the chills! I liked the way you drew the tears in his eye.
It's Revenge Time! :D
thanks that is how I wanted people to see it :)
witch means I got the message across
Good, but not as good
as your others, maybe a little more time.
um can u elaborate a bit on that?
That looks like the Adventure Quest brand.
Like that one game battleon hmmm makes me wonder if you stole it from um but w/e 8/10
lol well i have never even played Adventure Quest so i dont realey know what you are talking about.
any way thanks for commenting :)
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